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I'm VEXY and I Know It

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SweetMochi
Entry ID #: 906
Created: Fri, Jan 11, 2013 2:14 AM


VEX has changed my life in profound and inexpressible ways. It has taught me skills I will take into the future. It has brought me closer to friends I will cherish for a lifetime. It has given me experiences that I will never forget. I live and breathe VEX and I expect it to stay that way.

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Comments

   WasabiRyan on 01/24/2013

Nice imagery, use of "showing, not telling," and anaphora. I think it captures the attitude of your team very well and depicts a group of people that has flourished from its participation in VEX.

   pie306 on 01/24/2013

One word. Breathtaking.

   user387757 on 01/13/2013

Your introduction captured my attention and drew me into your essay. I was able to feel the excitement and intensity of robotics as I read through the paragraphs. I am excited to hear more stories about your successes and best of luck with your continuing journey with robotics! Very nicely written essay.